Monday, August 13, 2012

The Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 4.5

The lighthouse flashed periodically
As I stood and watched the ocean's arms
Slap into the precipice of rocks
Rocks that sit there and get beat
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C.R. Blazo
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Captain Cur 13 August 2012

Imaginative poem. Vividly expressed. I liked how you choose the colors which painted your words.

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Marcus Mckinley 13 August 2012

a new day dawns as your beacon of dreams fades into the past. nicely written and very expressive

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C.R. Blazo

C.R. Blazo

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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