Wednesday, October 22, 2008

The Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 4.1

The light house, the guardian angel of the night
She shines her light for all the lost sailors passing by
Her beam bright as the sun, flashing through the night sky
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Kay Staley 14 October 2014

The purpose of a lighthouse. If only we all had such an easily defined purpose and knew what our job was here on earth.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 October 2014

Light house and its services to ship and sailors great. In fact I think that light house represents the noblemen who gives such lights on the human lives of the world they live in.

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Babatunde Aremu 14 October 2013

This is simply beautiful. I like the personification of the Lighthouse

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Anita Sehgal 14 October 2012

well written... good read

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Kellen Sinclair 29 September 2010

i like the poem here is my poem Angel by: kellen sinclair mr.willis class 5th grade Humboldt, TN 38343 The angel, thr guardian of some people she/he flies above everyone playing with babies her/his ring beam bright as the sun, gleaming above in the clouds. that is all im not finish yet

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Dora Papadopoulou 07 August 2009

I love this poem. The metaphors are really good. Keep on, young poet! ! !

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Susan Jarvis 22 October 2008

The similes and metaphors cast some illiminating imagery - the opening line is magnificent. S :)

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