Saturday, June 20, 2009

The Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Into the midst of the thick darkness,
where no trees, no mountains can be seen,
what can be seen is only black,
far away towards the mountain,
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Priyanka Bhowmick
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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

wonderful cognitive visual metaphor: ''for you shine in my darkest nights.'' well written poem..10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

'Oh you shining lighthouse! ! following you is not easy for me, reaching you, impossible, glow you not, you arouse my pains, for you shine in my darkest nights.' Stunning poem with marvelous idea.10+++

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 20 June 2009

Priyanka. Congrats. First class! You have a marvelous job. Great write. Kudos.

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Sandra Martyres 20 June 2009

Lovely poem with very strong imagery..10

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