The Light With In A Person Comments

i like your poem. you think outside the box

Excellant theme and idea but not poetic. You have talent to grow as a poet. Always keep in your mind and soul that prose is not poem. A poem is composed from soul. But a prose is composed to inform. A poem is always shrouded. Theme of a poem is always hidden.

this is very very good! my fav of yours! your ending is very true. Becca