Thursday, July 24, 2008

The Light That Gave Hope Comments

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Within the dark where we see nothing,
there is the light that drives us on.
Wherever this darkness is incessantly growing,
the brightness of the light will guide us on.
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Sara Javed 08 July 2015

A wonderfully magical poem about hope... love it! It is a request to please read my poems. I will be grateful!

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Very beautiful poem, , nicely pened, , i hope to read more from you, keep up the good work.

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twilight lover 25 July 2008

hello (: nice poem. very thoughful. can tell that you've put in lotsa effort. great job!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 24 July 2008

What a great creative and interesting poem. You are really a born poet, considering that it is the first time you wrote a poem and your age.

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