Tuesday, May 3, 2011

The Light's In My Head - Villanelle Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a light in the sickroom that never goes dead,
Though daylight is dimming, through the still open curtain-
But the light's in my head; the light's in my head!
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Patti Masterman
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Romeo Della Valle 03 May 2011

I agree with Sandra, it is an amazing write! Well penned and poignant! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Sandra Martyres 03 May 2011

An amazing Villanelle...you have used a particularly difficult form with aplomb to describe the sad hospital scene....Patti, my heart goes out to the sufferes you describe here....I can empathise with you having seen both my parents pass through this familar route

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