Tuesday, July 10, 2007

The Light Of My Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wanted to give up
I wanted to leave everyone behind
Join the souls of no return
Embrace the darkness that is death
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Lelani Faifai
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Kawambee Thomas 19 July 2007

your writing is very powerful

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Jemarie Ragudo 14 July 2007

You have perfectly describe the transforming power of love in a poetic way. Good work.

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Lelani Faifai

Lelani Faifai

Vancouver, WA
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