Thursday, November 30, 2006

The Light Of Hope Comments

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Endless dark - or so it seems,
life is shattered, with all our dreams
of joy and hope, the fading light,
and darkness, darkness for all in sight.
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Rachel Slimm
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Uche Nwanze 25 May 2020

'A welcome friend, the silence broke, my soul returns, my demons choke...' An illuminating piece. Nicely penned.

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Toni O'neill 25 July 2007

You; re really such a talented poet Rachel, your poems really speak out to me. I have only just started to put a couple of my poems on this site as it was recommended by a friend, I ifind it helps a bit to get them out of you? The are old poems so far but you may want to read and let me know what you think? Toni x

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Karen Clements 07 December 2006

Another amazing poem, the transition from darkest depths to the source of light! well done and keep going Karen x

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Kavitha Krishnamurthy 30 November 2006

Wow. That was an excellent poem...

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Rachel Slimm

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