The Light Of Deity... Comments
Where were you when the Maple trees died?
Where were you when their leaves fell and dried?
Where were you when Nature's Mother's just sighed,
With a wink and smile to Autunns beguile.
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it was a very very very beautiful poem.thanks for shairing...10+++
What a beautiful poem, I agree he is everywhere. In nature, in the sky, in human creation. Lovely read.
God sows into all of the amazing cycles of life the sweet whisper of Resurrection. A beautiful poem, good sir. Well done, I look forward to reading more! Neal :)
A sweet s sublime song of the powerful presence of the Potentate/God. Well done!
Whoa! ! ! ! I'll go with susan and just say WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW! And Awesome too! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Funny thing is that with it's many structural faults, it had to be this one chosen for a P.O.D..when my name got pulled of the POD poetry pool...LoL...Grateful all the same, PH...Most of all, thanks to all who read, and mucho thanks to those who took the time to leave their cyber-mark...Again, much appreciated ~FjR~
He created, gave his soul to us and slept in our hearts. Now it's our responsibility to do the rest. A beautiful poem FJR, after a long time I see a very good selection of members poem of the day. Congratulations are needed by undeserving selections but it's customary so I congratulate you.
WoW. WoW. and WoW. Not very literary of me to say but so descriptive of how I felt after reading this masterpiece. I could say awesome but that doesn't express my feelings quite as well as WoW. I would applaud but you cannot hear. So..... WoW, sir, Wow!
Beautiful poem. One haunting question asked by humans is that why suffering is there. To accept and reconcile with Nature's way is a way forward.
Really profound, I had to read it quite few times in succession to let it sink in. enjoyed IT, THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
Following lines of the poem open up a wonderful narrative but the denouement would so dramatic and philosophical, I could not have imagined. It's just amazing. Liked it. Congrats for being on top of the order, Frank. Thanks. Where were you when the Maple trees cried? Where were you when their leaves fell and dried?
Before the air! With the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing.
Idea is unique to communicate ones belief. Light of Diety............exact. But question arises again, What is the origin of Light......Is their any dark to produce Light! !
A beautiful poem that touches the soul. Congratulations Frank for a well deserved award 'Poem of the Day'. Love & light Simone....10
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Even trees need a stretch of a long winters rest and nature mother has preserved many things for us and for all trees. God is powerful light of Deity and he controls natural actions. We feel God by observing nature. An excellent and powerful poem is nicely penned...10