Sunday, October 12, 2008

The Light Jubiliant Comments

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The wrath was pure,
when time seduced the end
to my grave, I was so sure
that the wound would be mend.
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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 October 2008

I likedd ur thems dear Asef...this is truly classical expression.....pl. do write....more and more such poems. If time permits read mine too, like MY SWEAT, MY MOMENTS, HONOURABLES etc......I'm sure u like them, but ofcourse expressed in a different way........10

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Manonton Dalan 12 October 2008

there's light and darkness of a day and equally there for us to play light brings temptation to your eyes darkness hides everything but sighs thanks for sharing.md

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