The Light In My Dream That Died Comments
Let me grieve
this loss
this light of my dream
how can something so beautiful
...
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False love - pain and disillusionment expressed so well in your poem.
Sometimes after pain comes a new horizon. It was time to let go of something that was nothing.
Such a sorrowful piece but beautifully constructed and totally engaging for the reader..I enjoyed this immensly! Lodigiana x
So happy you this poem touch you and your comment is very much appreciated.
let me grieve this dream that died and swallow the truth that it was all a lie/// greatly penned let the bitter truth come and let it hug entirely to kiss the lips of immortality.....///
Indeed, one has to swallow the bitter truth in life, this is very candidly and poignantly portrayed in this piece. Good read.
Written with elegance and acceptance... your presence and sadness are felt across throughout the poem.10+
An elegant sob of truth, feeling, sadness and despondency. A truly painful but elegantly written, very touching work.
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7/21/2025 5:16:28 PM # 1.0.0
Sadly not all dreams come true. But on the demise of old new dreams are born. A very well expressed poem of life's sad and bitter losses.
Looking for a new dream. When you lose hope of a dream that will never come true, it's hard to let go. But life is full of so much that we can look to fill the void with a new dream.