The Light Comments

Hey I feel you have won the challenge... Like the free flowing language and rhymes.... Rhyming is fun is it not? ...... this is good.... enjoyed reading your work..10 love shan

I have always done better when given a task (a la Creative Writing Class, etc) . I don't know why that is. But I rarely come up empty that way. Lucky you have a sister to challenge and inspire. (it obviously works well) . cheers Patti

This is clever as it's put well together with good rhyme and flow. If you hope the Light turned out right, a really do think so, but it left a question in my mind, why you had the need to follow... Karin Anderson