The Light Comments
*-I was up late, and my sister challenged me to write a poem. I told her I could not possibly do so on a whim, without any 'inspiration, ' but she persisted. She said, 'Call it 'The Light'.' So here is my poem- written on a whim, very quickly done. Hope it turned out alright! ! -*
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I have always done better when given a task (a la Creative Writing Class, etc) . I don't know why that is. But I rarely come up empty that way. Lucky you have a sister to challenge and inspire. (it obviously works well) . cheers Patti
This is clever as it's put well together with good rhyme and flow. If you hope the Light turned out right, a really do think so, but it left a question in my mind, why you had the need to follow... Karin Anderson
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7/25/2025 3:20:23 AM # 1.0.0
Hey I feel you have won the challenge... Like the free flowing language and rhymes.... Rhyming is fun is it not? ...... this is good.... enjoyed reading your work..10 love shan