Saturday, September 24, 2005

The Lift Was Out Comments

Rating: 2.4

The lift was out, and people walked
down from the thirteenth floor
some also went (but never talked)
upstairs which was a chore.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 September 2005

I know, I know. But can we PLEASE call her not a truck but a soulmate, a friend, a whatever. But not a truck. Thanks, Mahnaz, I would call you (if it were not for hubby) some really sweet names. Best wishes H

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 24 September 2005

It seems you have found your match in a truck Herbert....Love the poem! !

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Mary Nagy 24 September 2005

Sounds like you and 'Juliette' are enjoying some quality time together huh? There's a really cool, jacked-up jeep down the road that we can't help admiring...reminds me of you when I see it. Great poem Herbert. Sincerely, Mary

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