Monday, December 9, 2013

The Lifeless Comments

Rating: 5.0

I part with my heart set neatly upon the table;
A salami pricker beside it,
I part with the clothes still hanging damp
On the line
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Crystal Rosser
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fridayam 09 January 2018

I really like this. There is a prickle of real life about it.

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Urshula Davis 09 December 2013

Wow! I am blown away by your choice of words! ! ! ! This is an interesting read and it leaves me with questions but i like the way I feel.

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o, sad to read what a helpless lover who has to learn to be an stranger to her beloved one

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Crystal Rosser

Crystal Rosser

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