The life turned sour!
avoiding a bleak past i abhor
i stroll to the beach; swam ashore
the life turned sour!
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Poignant but a poem in great fine metaphor! Wow! I hope u read mine too.
very good poem ' life turned sour thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
If life turn sour, add some sweetness into it...dont be sad over the plate, change what you have now..sure you still can taste better life, and only you can manage to fit your taste...so come on, dont feel bad..do try to be better.. nice adrenalin poem, keep it up Aziz_Soul