Friday, December 29, 2006

The Life That We Are Part Of Comments

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one life
one soul
shared by
entities
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john tiong chunghoo
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Debora Short 29 December 2006

Incredible soul speak here, John! Wonderful capture! Debora

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Raynette Eitel 29 December 2006

I liked the beginning of this, John...mostly two-word lines. It was very effective, but then you got a little wordy, a little preachy. For me the poem ended with the stanza about the cloud. Just a thought. Raynette

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
john tiong chunghoo
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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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