Sunday, September 23, 2018

The Life Of Wrath Comments

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If I had glanced a single time,
To look beneath your lovely smile,
I'd have seen the pain you breathed,
I'd have seen the hurt you weaned.
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Sarah Persson
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 September 2019

rom never being cuddled, Never feeling you were loved, You walked around in limbo, Holding on to anger, being snubbed. From childhood onwards to feel that lovelessness and the consequent reaction.. which lingers in the heart life long. a very good poem. thought provoking. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2018

Looking at lovely moment we understand life's attitude with smile and joy. When everything is shared with God, the pain does not last for long. By his grace his pain goes away. Mother's love and affection we remember. Good is always good. No replacement is necessary. An interesting poem is excellently penned...10

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