Monday, September 19, 2011

The Life Of Vectorial Comments

Rating: 3.6

What matters of the world that cause me to deep sleep
So that I was in a class watching a sniper on the roof
Then followed the shouting from across the hallway
To save two young men’s life who were about to jump off the roof
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David Beckham
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Darnaryel Fantaisie 23 May 2012

A very good hand, an inspiring poem! Thank's for making me read it!

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Vipins Puthooran 07 October 2011

Excellent poem! life in human point of view, well penned here! how we bother about of our life...good poem!

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Auwal Abdullahi 20 September 2011

It is a good one. It has inspired me. Thank you for making me to read it. It will shape my future writings.

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Eric Cockrell 20 September 2011

this thin wisp that we call life... so easily taken, or lost... very good poem!

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 20 September 2011

Thoughtful good writing.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 20 September 2011

(The sum purpose of all fears I reckon A substantial flavor to life on earth) I like these two lines. This is a good poem.

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Megan Anderton 19 September 2011

thank you for sharing this with me.i agree with the two comments below. very well penned

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Unwritten Soul 19 September 2011

David, the poem should be read by many who need to think and what the life is about...is it just a wasting and we live by chance and made of natural science, Hard for me to think, all life has no purpose and how we being created so unique and complex...Deep thinking will lead of something, shallow life reason will take easy assuming...To save soul we can use soul, coz only true soul can create a greatest adhesion to save others, so cameras an media not a solution but depression...What we need in life is harmony of souls.. I see you try using your soul in poetry to save many of readers who need it..Well great job my friend_Unwritten Soul

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Ahmed Khaled 19 September 2011

life is a heavenly gift, granted to those on earth: dreamers, thinkers, or just sleepers so respecting life and saving it is an act of god and a good deed of those who adore the glory of god, those who care for others more than themselves, believing that loving others and caring for them is their main duty as well as their honourable path to glory and immortality upon this go on my friend in saving lives and poems in poemhunter, you are good, really you are good..yours[ph.d][a][k]

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