Tuesday, November 24, 2009

The Life Of The Cheated Comments

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Back in the love of my loved ones arms
Didn’t want me to go didn’t want no harm
But on that fateful day in mid july
She left me down at the river to die
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Robbie Squires
river july husband Girlfriend
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 November 2009

Well this is life Robbie. Women are always unpredictable. You have described it in a story-like manner. Try to be poetic and it would be better if you write metaphorically. Best Wishes Naseer

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

Akron, Ohio
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Robbie Squires
Akron, Ohio
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