The Life Of My Life Comments

Outstanding poem, MP... The life of my Life is one of your finest poem wisely written, I quote: And I found myself bereft of my being: In the repetitive circle of routine, In a vapid mundane reality That deprives me of my existence; Saturating itself at the core of whatever Might have become of my life.

Into my life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Luminous stars from eyes have sparked in to life that has come again in sense. In circle of routine finding self with nice mood is interesting. But still dilemma comes and reduce happiness is so sad. That deprives existence is thought provoking.10.

That is the case with most of us. You have captured a human dilemma in sheer poetic brilliance. Thanks. (10)

Mundane and monotonous life becomes oppressive casting away cherished dreams in the torrents of misery. Wonderful poem. Loved it.10/10

Life has come into my life and the routines of boring life the tug of war between the routines and urge to do something new every time is well put together in your poem