Thursday, February 23, 2017

The Life Of Life Comments

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Don't remember,
Still can't recall,
The fusion of gametes.
The beginning of,
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Nicholas Franklin Chong
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Valsa George 01 March 2017

A poem starting with inception in the womb of a mother to the final stage of turning into dust, comprising all the stages of life..... showing the dimensions of existence... and finally an exhortation to love and be the light! Beautiful poem Nicholas!

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Unwritten Soul 26 February 2017

Nicholas, your words idea and some sort of innate feeling flow very well here, beautiful work... Hans and Chinedu were right.. You know u should keep writing of anything that cross in your mind then you might see how big this effort can bring to u... Keep it up dear

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Nicholas Franklin Chong 27 February 2017

Thanks and will do.

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Hans Vr 25 February 2017

This is a wonderful reflection. The verses and flowing nicely Excellent. Keep it up.

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Nicholas Franklin Chong 27 February 2017

Thanks. It's been pleasant penning this.

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Chinedu Dike 24 February 2017

Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful philosophical poem with a call for universal brotherhood of man. Lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Nicholas.

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Nicholas Franklin Chong 27 February 2017

Thanks for appreciating this poem. This pretty much sums up the basis of my principles in life.

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