Friday, March 5, 2010

The Life Of A Streetlamp Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clock raised its hands in the dead of the night
and the street creatures fell into order.
Blackness fell back from the corner streetlight
as dark spaces between lost their border.
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Amera Andersen
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Craig Turner 05 March 2010

i liked this very much, i do think you could lose a few syllables here and there to help the flow and it might be even better x

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