Sunday, February 26, 2012

The Life Of A Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the great bright sun,
Stands a little bud dancing with fun.
The tender petals are all wrapped up,
Like a pink fairy cup.
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 26 February 2012

This is the work of nature... that every flower that gently draws it breathe shall one day, wither and return to earth. Change is a progress...wether good or bad For in such, other's oppinions are accomodated. And the evolution of life is kept alive. Nice work...keep it up. You shud read my poem...A Picture and Written in Harmattan Season...do leave a comment/criticism....thanks for sharing

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Dave Walker 26 February 2012

A really great poem, really like it. A great write.

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