The Life Machine Comments

It is obvious you are in love with words. It is a terminal condition that ends...with writing.(smile) Wonderful craft in this poem. Divine Mechanic would be proud.

Marvelous poem on life machine. Yes this 'machine designed and made by Divine Mechanic! ' 10+++

Very much true words..but only this god-made machine has changed the human life most mechanized..also a fact..is it not? ..interesting

This is a very good poem penned with zeal

Absolutely great is the creation of the Divine Mechanic! A well crafted poem!

nice to read dis....

An awesome composition very well designed.

And this rare divine mechanism disclosed before our eyes …. the combined effort of the senses, hand and mind.. Interesting and enriching.. Abha

a thought provoking poem i must say, appreciation of God's creation and the creator too. well done..

all i said in the poem there i am 'unaware'...

You take the intangible... and cleverly form for us great actions.... tis a constant body of works... from where-everest it came! ! ! ! aroha

thoughts are inputs into a machine you call body...you miss the message in the poem sadly premji!

Dear keshavji, You write about thoughts, but imagine: what will happen if reoccurring thoughts come? Then poetry will run away in no time... thoughts like unbridled horses are a treasure to poet. if they are stagnant, u r gone!

Pushes to go deep in itself … the Original, philosophical image. Psychological metaphors … Thanks -!

simply superb..... what a wonderful representation of God's creation..... loved it...

Hi Dear Easwaran A well structured and superb poem from a super mind. First thought came out from a divine sound 'Om'.Now our minds are full with thoughtless thoughts.Only relief is that there are poems like this for food for thoughts. great peom Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

If you look deep into the God's every creation, there are hidden mysteries to be found. Some supernatural power is playing such a wonderful role to keep up the floating balance in the entire universe. With all the six senses God has given us, we should learn many things every second in our lives. A good poem indeed.

Brilliant Ke, one of your best I think, I particularly like the last stanza, the concept of life,10 for this, Lynda xxx

an outcome of an engineering mind.. its great...

All is logical... Fine thinking... The culmination a verse in the ending and me this is pleasant very much. Tsira