The Life In Boarding School... Comments
I had an adult in me when I was a child,
The life’s cruel experiences had taught,
Very cruel lessons when I was just five,
Never played with toys, though I had many,
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i loved the way you used metaphorical language in your poem. you have expressed your feelings in real depth which has enhanced the meaning of your poem. you could try removing extra the from your poem. thanks a lot for sharing your poem
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8/17/2025 9:16:24 AM # 1.0.0
its a good piece i lyk it