Thursday, May 28, 2009

~~the Life I Never Wanted~~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look in the mirror and what do I see?
nothing but the pretty girl I wish I could be
My friends tell me I should be happy about who I am,
but right here, right now I don't think I can.
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Angelic Warrior
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Beautiful poem my dear. You're special.

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I look in the mirror and what do I see? nothing but the pretty girl I wish I could be the mirror will not speak lie and give u inner pictuare too... lovley write dear... read mine ' my friend in mirror' i am disgrace and no separate ways...comment

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Erika Lewis 03 July 2009

This is a very touching poem. When I read this I was like wow! That's so true about life.

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Noel Reasoner 19 June 2009

What a heart-felt and honest poem. Great job!

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Crystle Jones 18 June 2009

again, i completely relate! you have a great out look. its nice to see someone so proud. i vote. hmmmm 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! yet again lol

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Lady Grace 01 June 2009

a beautiful poem i read..there are many meanings of reflections..yours is very good, , very open and honest..grace

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Fiona Davidson 28 May 2009

Excellent writing AW....and bravo for sticking to your guns girl...10+++

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