Wednesday, February 14, 2007

The Life-Cycle Of A Toy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where it came from
is a mystery
like the virgin birth.
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Max Reif
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Francesca Johnson 15 February 2007

Just a reminder, Max, that I thought this was a brilliant poem, as I said in my previous comment. By the way, this site was unobtainable for a lot of us and we have only just been able to get back onto it. Love, Fran xxx

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Allan James Saywell 14 February 2007

DEAR MAX ACCORDING TO THE STATS THERE ARE ONLY TWO PEOPLE ON LINE SO THAT IS WHY YOU ARENT' GETTING ANY RESPONSE TO YOUR POEM AJS

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Max Reif 14 February 2007

a slightly different version of this poem got 4 '10' votes last night, and these two comments: Francesca Johnson (2/14/2007 5: 41: 00 AM) Unless it's a Stieff teddy bear, ofcourse. Joking aside, this poem could be about life in general, too. Just look at the way some of our old folk end up - in nursing homes, forgotten and unloved. A poem which has many analogies.....an interesting read here, Max. Love, Fran xx Alison Smith (2/13/2007 11: 14: 00 PM) The toys gradual fall from the top is similar to that of love... at first we see them occassionally then more often then way too often until we dont see them at all and finally they get dropped for another toy.... Alison

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