Tuesday, August 13, 2019

The Life: A Fragment Comments

Rating: 4.7

since life is a journey of constant steps;
Darkness to colours, and to light,
Every one steps into the seven hues;
Embryo, infadolescent, youth, lover of life,
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Jagdish Singh Ramana
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Akhtar Jawad 12 April 2020

A nice comment on a lovely poem.

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Rajnish Manga 18 January 2020

The philosophy of life's journey through different stages explained quite beautifully. A youthful heart stays young through this journey. Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2019

NICE BUT U HAVE NOT READ MY POEMS INSPIRED BY YOU READ MY ROOTS POEM NOW WILL U U HAVE TAKEN A LONG TYME TO COME

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Bharati Nayak 09 September 2019

Yes, life is a mixture of different colours - -a great poem, thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 September 2019

A wonderful and insightful poem. The closure line expresses all.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 August 2019

A nice philosophical drop. Loved it and thanks for sharing.

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Randhir Kaur 18 August 2019

Beautiful stage. What beautiful journey. πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒLast line is touching.

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Thanks for appreciating my effort. I remember I had read your some of poems. You have a deep love for Sikhism. I would like to read more of your works. Thank you dear poetess!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 August 2019

A well crafted poem, Jagdish...10+++

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Jagdish Singh Ramana

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