Wednesday, May 22, 2013

The Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

My days are not long enough
But, it takes too long that i couldn't even laugh
Searching things that could brings joy,
But nothing to be found, not even a toy
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Ellen Mendez
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Ricky June Espanueva 25 December 2013

One of the poems I'll give 11 out of 10.... nice write.

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Abhishek Mishra 30 September 2013

Fantastic..amazing poem about life..it's awesome inspite all the problems through which it proceeds: -)

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Dave Walker 04 July 2013

A great poem, in the end we always find a way through life.

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Ambrosia A 09 June 2013

Wow, a great poem with philosophical approach to life. I loved reading it again and again. Ur Note makes it clear that ur now out of it. Yes, so true God is really great and rt out there for a needy people. Have faith and he will be just behind u to protect.

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