The Liar Comments

For once a cheat always a cheat be careful of the seeds you reap......... experiences which make us mature in relationships........ all that glitters is not gold.......... thank you Ann God bless u

Annette, not everything we think is worth saying, everything we say isn’t worth writing, everything we write isn’t worth posting. If this is some sort of pastiche about infidelity, well, we can take or leave its poetic merit as we find it, but if it having a kick at a real Mr F by writing up his name on the Poemhunter wall, I’d say that has nought to do with poetry. Approval can come cheap on poemhunter - don't take it at face value. Barney

Good riddance to a bad person, and you got a good poem out of it! Well written, my friend.

So good to release this person pain. Not a popular man at all! Thank you and good luck for your new future.

wooow...well done and great written....

Written with great power of your new freedom from this liar, he is a coward and has no conscience, you have released the power he had over you Annette by writing this powerful, moving and inspired write!

yes, a liar may have a lair! ! stay away from it.

the of he went to start his living. i think you need some lubricant on keys n and f. hee-hee. and liar or lair? it's only fair.............. you tell good old Bri! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm liking this: (even WITH becareful, which here in California i would spell be careful. but it could be all the drugs i'm taking! and oil the i key as well, my friend. yes, this: Becareful those who take hm in a wolf in sheeps clothing lies within I'd question every word he utters the wool he pulls could be yours and others. ...................i like the rhyming as well. - - - - - - - - - - - who, pray TELL, is John Forsyth? ? ? i think there was an actor in u.s.a. with that name. and, what about this stanza? i think it could use some makeover. ask if you don't agree. For he will die a lonesome man whom can he trust, or ever can. For once a cheat always a cheat becareful of the seeds you ripe. .......................... ...............and ripe? maybe in U.K.? here i've heard the saying something like this: You reap what you sow.***** **** [i don't usually use a bible passage as a reference! ] Galatians 6: 7 Do not be deceived: God cannot be mocked. A man... biblehub.com/galatians/6-7.htm Bible Hub Don't be misled- you cannot mock the justice of God. You will always... Do not be deceived. God is not mocked, for whatever a man sows, that he will also reap. ‎Galatians 6: 8 · ‎Galatians 6: 6 · ‎King James Bible · ‎Galatians 6: 7 ======================= bri ;) to MyPoemList

There is no hurt quite the same as being betrayed, especially when it is done in a crafty, premeditated way! And you are right....people like this die lonely because the betray themselves as well leaving a void which cannot be filled. You put pure emotion into this poem.

Well thought out poem, I think we've all had the misfortune to met at least one unscrupulous underhand lair who's sole purpose in life is just themselves no matter how much damage and hurt is caused to others.

A wolf in sheep's clothing. Lies destroy everything in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.