i had a problem on my mind,
the answer to which was hard to find.
i tossed and turned throughout the night
and a knot in my stomach, which i could not fight.
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life's complexities are hard to define...our growth is proportional to these experiences, i guess...well written, sir.
I love the rhyme this one takes. Not your normal style. I think it's a part of life where some day you will always think the grass is greener on the other side. It's nice to have the understanding in the background knowing that wild oats need to be sow. Really enjoyed it.
A love story with smiling end is always good to read. Nice narration.
For a change I will quote a song for you sir... 'Westlife The Rose Lyrics: Some say love it is a river That drowns the tender reed Some say love it is a razor That leaves your soul to bleed Some say love it is a hunger An endless, aching need I say love it is a flower And you, it's only seed It's the heart afraid of breaking That never learns to dance It's the dream afraid of waking That never takes the chance It's the one who won't be taken Who cannot seem to give And the soul afraid of dying That never learns to live When the night has been too lonely And the road has been too long And you think that love is only For the lucky and the strong Just remember in the winter Far beneath the bitter snows LIES THE SEED THAT WITH SUN'S RAYS IN THE SPRING BECOMES ROSE.....' This is beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! simple, but a lovely story narrated in your special style! ! ! with love shan
Amazing and very interesting. A most enjoyable piece of art to read. Put together and organized very well. Ryhme just fits. Good story, good lesson. Nice job. I liked it. :) Deborah Cromer
Letters that touch the soul with simplicity and grace.10/10. Warmest regards, Sandra