Sunday, January 14, 2007

The Letter Unread! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unto mine heart is hidden
The letter never written
Never given onto voice
Nor upon paper released
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Geoff Warden
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Original Unknown Girl 23 January 2007

Agree with Frankie here, I like this usage of the couplet at the end. Sometimes they tell more in so few words. 'Tis a fine ending for sure.... HG: -) xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2007

Solid work...last 2 lines ? ....Slam Dunk! FJR

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Geoff Warden

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