Saturday, August 15, 2009

The Letter (Double Etheree) Comments

Rating: 3.4

(Woman Reading a Letter - painting by Jan Vermeer, c.1663)

There
standing
...
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Ben Gieske
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Sandra Martyres 25 September 2009

You have done real justice to this poetic form Ben...and to the painting too...a beautiful piece.10/10

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Lillian Thomas 11 September 2009

very well-written, good imagery. It does encompass the painting completely.

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Ivor Hogg 30 August 2009

a fine use of form Ben, choice theme which brings back memories

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beautiful poem... loved the form.

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Surya . 24 August 2009

vow! really beautiful poem. nice composition. meaningful. i liked and enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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A simply beautiful poem, almost an ethereal quality to my mind. As I read 'warming touch descending through her' my eyes descended down the page so creatively. Also 'Mother's joy coming home' brought me back home too! 10 love Karin

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