Wednesday, October 7, 2020

The Letter Comments

Rating: 4.9

This is letter, an autumnal leaf from the abode heart
There are many alphabets, many words, many sentences
There are immense desire, fragrant emotions
There are dyed intoxicated soul, delightful idol of you
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Mac Che 25 January 2021

beautiful loving poem shared.......god bless you

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Indira Renganathan 20 October 2020

An emotional love poem with an advice to be cautious...thought provoking...5stars

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

The autumnal poetry letter is full of warm emotions, the message of eternal love for a soft-hearted poet, written in a strong and beautiful poetic language, warmth in the yellow autumn and amenable in the strangeness of time

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

In fear of being killed In one winter morning In the foggy grave with the tears of falling dreams The lifeless spirit lives as a corpse On the letter which cut into pieces

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

oh! What a terrible power of love has when it crosses its limitation then it kills all

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

I see myself being idolized in the very distant past Again sometimes see I'm the sound of supreme being That's why In this wordy statements, In this actionable confessions, in this realistic presence I can't find myself

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In fear of being killed In one winter morning In the foggy grave with the tears of falling dreams The lifeless spirit lives as a corpse On the letter which cut into pieces....****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 October 2020

We must always be in control of our feelings otherwise we will be held captive by it and ruin our lives. A nice poem with a meaningful message.

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2020

Nicely composed . 5 ***** In fear of being killed In one winter morning In the foggy grave with the tears of falling dreams The lifeless spirit lives as a corpse On the letter which cut into pieces

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 October 2020

A letter of how you feel. Its good to express how you feel. It lightens the burden in the heart

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2020

(2) It's oft like that, when love is not in control Then........that love is no love anymore, it is called L.U.S.T. dear poet. Love remains love, no matter what. A wondefrul poem full of thought provokings, dear poet. I have read more than once and have much enjoyed this! God's bliss when love is, but when l.u.s.t. is celebrating evilish moments are presenting. Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous much thought provoking poem.5 stars

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Terry Craddock 07 October 2020

'In fear of being killed In one winter morning In the foggy grave' a genuine fear, some develop more with age, some males live in societies where youth considers itself immortal, mortality comes as a shook I have always thought death is but a new beginning and 'to live in hearts we leave behind is not to die' I finished my bucket list fast when young, when bucket lists were not even a thing, so no regrets, regrets I do not believe in, because it is easy to be wise after the event

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Varsha M 07 October 2020

A very thoughtful and expressive poetry. Well crafted and written. Life as a corpse, of fear Abandoning that gear Bowing to lie Tune.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2020

Marvelous poem, I cite you here a few lines: Cause- there is you This your are none but the soul, my soul of love Yes, sometimes where I feel Love is eternal young, ever powerful when it lives in control There another time same I feel Love is savage, heartless killer when can't control it

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