The Letter Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The Letter

Rating: 4.9


This is letter, an autumnal leaf from the abode heart
There are many alphabets, many words, many sentences
There are immense desire, fragrant emotions
There are dyed intoxicated soul, delightful idol of you
Everything there are sermonizing the speech of you
This your are none but the soul, my soul of love

But sometimes I lose this highlighted letter
I see myself being idolized in the very distant past
Again sometimes see I'm the sound of supreme being
That's why
In this wordy statements,
In this actionable confessions,
in this realistic presence
I can't find myself

Cause- there is you
This your are none but the soul, my soul of love

Yes, sometimes where I feel
Love is eternal young,
ever powerful
when it lives in control

There another time same I feel
Love is savage, heartless killer
when can't control it

oh! What a terrible power of love has
when it crosses its limitation then it kills all

In fear of being killed
In one winter morning
In the foggy grave
with the tears of falling dreams
The lifeless spirit lives as a corpse
On the letter which cut into pieces


20.09.2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, October 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel,letter,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 08 October 2020

I see myself being idolized in the very distant past Again sometimes see I'm the sound of supreme being That's why In this wordy statements, In this actionable confessions, in this realistic presence I can't find myself

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2020

(2) It's oft like that, when love is not in control Then........that love is no love anymore, it is called L.U.S.T. dear poet. Love remains love, no matter what. A wondefrul poem full of thought provokings, dear poet. I have read more than once and have much enjoyed this! God's bliss when love is, but when l.u.s.t. is celebrating evilish moments are presenting. Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous much thought provoking poem.5 stars

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 October 2020

A letter of how you feel. Its good to express how you feel. It lightens the burden in the heart

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2020

Nicely composed . 5 ***** In fear of being killed In one winter morning In the foggy grave with the tears of falling dreams The lifeless spirit lives as a corpse On the letter which cut into pieces

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 October 2020

We must always be in control of our feelings otherwise we will be held captive by it and ruin our lives. A nice poem with a meaningful message.

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

beautiful loving poem shared.......god bless you

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Indira Renganathan 20 October 2020

An emotional love poem with an advice to be cautious...thought provoking...5stars

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

The autumnal poetry letter is full of warm emotions, the message of eternal love for a soft-hearted poet, written in a strong and beautiful poetic language, warmth in the yellow autumn and amenable in the strangeness of time

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

In fear of being killed In one winter morning In the foggy grave with the tears of falling dreams The lifeless spirit lives as a corpse On the letter which cut into pieces

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Soran M. H 08 October 2020

oh! What a terrible power of love has when it crosses its limitation then it kills all

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