Tuesday, April 3, 2018

The Lethargy Comments

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My days are all so indolent.
As I stroll across the corridor,
My eyes fixed at the huge round clock.
I binge and I lull so deep.
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Plabita Bhaskar
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Kishore Kumar Das 29 May 2018

you might be physically tired; but not mentally...otherwise how can you write such beautiful lines! lethargy helps to live at one's own terms....

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Naila Rais 03 April 2018

A nice write... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE too.. Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 April 2018

Popped out an eye from the quilt, as I peep The nimbus clamor and rains The air around breaks a lullaby, I'm lethargic, oh! ! let me sleep. oh allow me to sleep........ desire, cosy atmosphere. love to rest.. fine poem giving into emotions that you express so well now. tha nk u dear poetess. tony

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