Wednesday, January 9, 2013

The Leper Comments

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He was a minister who had lost his way.
Inside was a monster bursting forth to get away.
He was demented, he was indiscreet;
He was picking prostitutes off the street.
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Khairul Ahsan 14 September 2013

A sinister character has been well portrayed. Seems you watched him closely before writing this. 'With each and every foul act of this foreplay; He had been stripping layers of his soul away. It was rotting; it was full of decay. It was not something he could wash away. He was losing each piece of his humanity; Until there was nothing left but his insanity.' A vivid description of the monster.

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