The Legendary Untold Comments

I really appreciate how you turn your phrases to express while saying nothing... It's like we can feel a wind pressure, to guide and open the mind, saying: think about it and say it yourself, with your own words! In the end I wasn't sure anymore of the context but I guess it's wanted... It's very inspiring! Thank you!

This is a piece which says itself of the genius that it comes from..I always wish that i write poems such as these yet to me I end uo much lower.. thanks.

I love the rhythm, pace, metric and imagery of this poem as the poet describes the hard circumstances on The Legendary Untold... My favourite lines are these: ... He is the flaming fire of the soul/ As an unextinguished burning coal and the three last lines: The heart has a burn on the oven/ MOves hither and thither with unbearable strain/ Dying a death of failure and pain. Keep up writing and sharing with us... Maria

Wow it surely is one of your best works

Nice poem....beautifully scuptured.....enuf hv been said bt the truth remains unspoken...keep it up. Please read my poem...A picture...thanks for sharing

A stunning poem by the best of them all! I love your beautiful poems.Congratulations and best wishes to you.

As I sit here om my own, I think of my mind-overcrowded with loads, of those little things that I left untold. Nice piece man.

Yes, this is the picture now. Wait until he finds real self confidence. The whole picture will change. When he finds that everything is up to his belief and thoughts. If he dwells on problems, he gets, if he dwells on beauty, harmony, eventually his whole world will be changed to that. Wake up man!

The ones whose hearts aren't sensitive they never be satisfied morally.Nine point for this poem. Nilufer DURSUN

Excellent. Well said, fine introspective poetry.

YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT SUPPRESSED FEELINGS, SLEEPING VOLCANO THAT MAY ERUPT ANY TIME. TONE AND TEMPO OF THE POEM HAS DIFFERENT BEAT AND RHYTHM AND COMPEL THE READER TILL THE END PLAIN TRUTH OF SUPPRESSION AND ITS WOES.ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT ANY PHILOSOPHY WAHAB? -KAVIN CHARALAN

wow. its just amazin.. best poem untold

A road to heart and sweet words yet untold Speaking is busy everywhere Yet the untold entity is there. He resides in the every corner of the heart Of every man, like a blind black stone He is a deaf and dumb walking down the road.

Powerful words, strong message, amazing poem Wahub....keep them coming.

your poem is a story of life.... Original, unique and unrepeatable, I know many people who would say that it is written about them...you are a philosopher and mystic poet for me because your poems exert inexplicable influence on human. thanks :)

Its a great good poem Mr. Wahab.

a great poem...having a good theme.......

the first paragraph itself is superg and can address the rest of the passage. marks 10

highly philosophical lines, Abdul

Love the honesty, nice write, i look forward to reading ones similiar, i really liked it. :)