Tuesday, August 1, 2006

The Legendary Beast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warnings began at the dawn of the rotten land
The ground shakes probably to elude more threats
Evil perpetrated the land assuming the role of the eastern winds
Almost as an army, eager to conquer and longing for murder...
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Erasmo Rayon
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Michael Gale 23 October 2006

Great poem. But i really think you probably should come back down to earth and realize you cannot build a light sabre. Come on-get for real my fellow poet of the rhyming write. Ya got a ten for this great write kind sir. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Joshua Fegley 18 October 2006

It's very morbid. I like it......C. Erasmo Rayon N. Laters....................Joshua.

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