Tuesday, October 22, 2013

The Legend Of Snake Hollow (A Halloween Spirit) (Horror Horror Horror Horror) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tick, tick, tick, echoed the miner's pick
Unleashing the captive from the depths below
The guardian of the treasure's soul
Deep within the Long Range Mine
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
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brandon 31 October 2018

halloween is so amazing i also want to know what is the legend of halloween

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Naomi Chao 15 September 2014

I do not really understand why some people writes the word death so many times in their poems...: (

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Richard Blay 31 March 2014

Great work. good use of figurative elements. I love this poem

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Lilac Time 27 March 2014

I love this poem! It's so awesome and spooky. I could picture this in my head which is what I love about poetry...very nice.

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Patricia Grantham 28 November 2013

A very ominous write with a penchant for details. One must stay out of its way. Not for the weak minded. Well crafted!

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