Sunday, October 19, 2008

**** The Legend *** Comments

Rating: 4.6

From the sofa I saw sweet Muffin
Naked on mirror
So raw of meats
Emits…
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 January 2009

The extract from Kayla Nace's comment: Kayla Nace (10/21/2008 5: 18: 00 PM) THAT WAS AMAZING I GIVE IT A 10++ ^.^ ^.^

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Ben Gieske 16 December 2008

I find this a bit overwhelming. Such a powerful appealing to my senses.

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Kite Remedy 08 November 2008

Great works.. You can depict something so simple so beautifully.. Nice, Friends..

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Tsira Goge 01 November 2008

Sulaiman, Remarkably... Beautiful poems...10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Yasser Koor 26 October 2008

Ooooops nice poem i like it it is beautiful legendary I’m amazed!

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Angeline Snowboy 24 October 2008

awsome i liked it! =) i enjoyd reading it!

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Brianna Wilshusen 23 October 2008

I like it, its different and irt shows your individuality. good job,9

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The Grandmother is Watching 22 October 2008

I quite enjoy your descriptive way of writing.

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Tim Woodhouse 22 October 2008

Poetic priapism! I secretly loved it, but please don't tell my wife that I visit these sites! She's convinced that I am pursuing academic research, which is true in a way.... Tim W.

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Katherine Sessor 22 October 2008

Great poem! I loved it, which i knew i would. =) A 10 for a great poem! Kat

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Fiona Davidson 22 October 2008

Beautifully descriptive words....thank you for this...

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John Dohoney 21 October 2008

great stuff Sulaiman the descriptions made me want to wash up I really felt it

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Carol Rhodes 21 October 2008

SULAIMAN, DEAR MASTER DESCRIBER OF THE SENUOUS AND NATURAL INSTINCTS TO BOND, YOU STEP AWAY FROM THE ANIMAL LUST AND EMBRACE THE POETRY THAT IS WOMAN, YET YOU MAINTAIN THE BASIC SULTRY UNDERLYING MALE IMPULSES SO BEAUTIFULLY. OKAY, SO WHEN ARE WE GOING TO HAVE THE PRIVILEGE OF READING YOUR SELF HELP BOOK FOR THOSE IN NEED OF FREEING THEIR REPRESSED AND WANTING-TO-STEAM URGES? WHEN DOES YOUR LECTURE AND VIDEO TAPE TOUR BEGIN? YOU'LL BE SOLD OUT IN EVERY CITY. LOTS OF WOMEN IN THE SEATS BUT THERE'LL BE AN EQUAL AMOUNT OF MALES. YOU ARE 'HOT' IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE. EVERYTHING YOU WRITE HAS HEAT AND INFO THAT COMBINE TO ACTIVATE LEARNING AND LONGING AND JEALOUSY! THANKS, CAROL

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Carl Harris 21 October 2008

Well, this is an impressively written and expressive poem, Sulaiman, one that almost overwhelms the reader with it's thinly disguised sexual imagination. Still, as poems of this nature go, it is a well written poem that refuses to degenerate into something else other than imagination. Carl.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 October 2008

interesting! keep writing, Sir!

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cherry poppins 20 October 2008

it's extremly good i wish i could get you perfessional opinion on my peom which praticly took me a year to write. it a work of art you might say alll the best cherry poppins

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Shade Rhodieson 20 October 2008

wow....very flowey...^_^

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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2008

a legendary flow...10

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Annie Girl 20 October 2008

nice.......great form of words.

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Kaye Cee 20 October 2008

I'm not sure what your poem means, but it has a certain flow and wonderment about it. Poet John Ashbury writes like this. I couldn't find fault with it, as it's a puzzle almost, but it's intriguing. I think you're writing about a dog with someone in love with it. That's my guess. Very good. Kaye Cee

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