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The extract from Kayla Nace's comment: Kayla Nace (10/21/2008 5: 18: 00 PM) THAT WAS AMAZING I GIVE IT A 10++ ^.^ ^.^

I find this a bit overwhelming. Such a powerful appealing to my senses.

Great works.. You can depict something so simple so beautifully.. Nice, Friends..

Sulaiman, Remarkably... Beautiful poems...10... Best wishes, Tsira

Ooooops nice poem i like it it is beautiful legendary I’m amazed!

awsome i liked it! =) i enjoyd reading it!

I like it, its different and irt shows your individuality. good job,9

I quite enjoy your descriptive way of writing.

Poetic priapism! I secretly loved it, but please don't tell my wife that I visit these sites! She's convinced that I am pursuing academic research, which is true in a way.... Tim W.

Great poem! I loved it, which i knew i would. =) A 10 for a great poem! Kat

Beautifully descriptive words....thank you for this...

great stuff Sulaiman the descriptions made me want to wash up I really felt it

SULAIMAN, DEAR MASTER DESCRIBER OF THE SENUOUS AND NATURAL INSTINCTS TO BOND, YOU STEP AWAY FROM THE ANIMAL LUST AND EMBRACE THE POETRY THAT IS WOMAN, YET YOU MAINTAIN THE BASIC SULTRY UNDERLYING MALE IMPULSES SO BEAUTIFULLY. OKAY, SO WHEN ARE WE GOING TO HAVE THE PRIVILEGE OF READING YOUR SELF HELP BOOK FOR THOSE IN NEED OF FREEING THEIR REPRESSED AND WANTING-TO-STEAM URGES? WHEN DOES YOUR LECTURE AND VIDEO TAPE TOUR BEGIN? YOU'LL BE SOLD OUT IN EVERY CITY. LOTS OF WOMEN IN THE SEATS BUT THERE'LL BE AN EQUAL AMOUNT OF MALES. YOU ARE 'HOT' IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE. EVERYTHING YOU WRITE HAS HEAT AND INFO THAT COMBINE TO ACTIVATE LEARNING AND LONGING AND JEALOUSY! THANKS, CAROL

Well, this is an impressively written and expressive poem, Sulaiman, one that almost overwhelms the reader with it's thinly disguised sexual imagination. Still, as poems of this nature go, it is a well written poem that refuses to degenerate into something else other than imagination. Carl.

interesting! keep writing, Sir!

it's extremly good i wish i could get you perfessional opinion on my peom which praticly took me a year to write. it a work of art you might say alll the best cherry poppins

wow....very flowey...^_^

a legendary flow...10

nice.......great form of words.

I'm not sure what your poem means, but it has a certain flow and wonderment about it. Poet John Ashbury writes like this. I couldn't find fault with it, as it's a puzzle almost, but it's intriguing. I think you're writing about a dog with someone in love with it. That's my guess. Very good. Kaye Cee