The legacy of the blue
The same blue as of the sea and the skies
the legacy of love all ruffle in blue divine
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it is love of nature and not stoic to real inner love fragrance of summer’s rain smooches the dust sultry breeze satiates the thirst of the dry skin time flows in its own way flecking your sorrows. new leaf may come with renewed hope of tomorrow
Exquisite vocabulary-perfect choice of metaphors and imagery, very innovative style of writing. The Legacy of the Blue--my favourite color--blue is the color that I am dreaming of (a song) transcends all. I love the fragrances of the summers rain----- the sultry breezes------ the rain may come from the cloud of flames----- Great write. Thanks for sharing with us 10+ to you sir regards anju
Excellent poem Doc, I truly enjoyed this write for sure. Hugs, Linda
I like the use of the colour blue in this piece, wonderful imagery and well written too, Thanks, Lynda xx
The color blue transcends both time and distance. It is indeed the color of both love and remembrance. Exquisite, Dr.Kar. Warmest regards, Sandra
This poem could be a celebration, or reminiscence of utter sadness... very well written and full of colour, love and sensuality.
beautiful imagery and some innovative lines. well composed. thanks.10
new leaf may come with renewed hope of tomorrow........... how true, every day brings new hopes to start everything fresh nice poem with good imagery and metaphors my 10
If i could, i'd happily give you an 11 for all your poetry Dr. :)
as the summer breeze never tells its sorrow ............................................................. Fine, remarkable poems... 10/// Best wishes, Tsira
Indeed love is as deep and broad as sea and sky when I read your poem THE LEGACY OF THE BLUE!
the dance of Nature has been wonderfully pictorised....cool breeze during summer...well done Dr