Saturday, December 5, 2015

The Leaves Have Turned Yellow Comments

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The leaves have turned yellow

the skies scowl at me
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Sofia Kioroglou
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 September 2016

The sky's camera shutter speed dazzles my windscreen wipers blurring my vision as I crash into the sturdy steel barriers A beautiful poem so nicely written. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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Halin Roche 30 April 2016

you have depicted an accident in the most poetic way Sofia... thanks

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Raymond Farrell 18 February 2016

Yikes, I hope you survived the crash.

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Ripper Jones 15 January 2016

A moment in time. Very Woolfian. Enjoyable.

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Sofia Kioroglou 15 January 2016

Thank you kindly for your appreciation of my write. It is greatly appreciated and keep reading 😉

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Leloudia Migdali 11 January 2016

Such a vivid description! Very powerful and emotional! I loved it!

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Sofia Kioroglou 11 January 2016

Thank you so much Leloudia and God bless you! Happy New Year full of joy, bliss and inspiration. Thank you for following me on wordpress. I admire your work!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 January 2016

he heavens have opened fire shooting bullets Lightning flashes again. The sky's camera shutter speed such a wonderful imagination and a great graphic. your imaginative capacity is great. thank you. tony dazzles my windscreen wipers blurring my vision

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2015

Speed! With the muse of nature and the ways of mankind. Nice work.

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Kewayne Wadley 07 December 2015

Very emotional, very vivid illustrations Painted on the page. A tug on the heartstrings at the end. KW

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Sofia Kioroglou 07 December 2015

Thank you kindly for your appreciation of my poem! I feel humbled by your response. It is a powerful piece of work and I am glad it has struck a chord with you. God bless you and heartfelt greetings from beautiful Greece.

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2015

Even it was an accident, but you presented it in very soft way with surprise...very good :)

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Sofia Kioroglou 07 December 2015

Thank you so much dear!

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Georgios Venetopoulos 06 December 2015

I hope it is not a true story. It is a well written piece of prose, resilient and intensely descriptive. I like it! Keep up the good work, Sofia!

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Sofia Kioroglou 07 December 2015

Thank you so much George! Your comments are always greatly appreciated.Have a nice week and God bless you!

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Panos Ambelas 06 December 2015

Very emotional poem. Nice Work!

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Sofia Kioroglou 07 December 2015

Thank you so much Panos. I really appreciate your positive comment. I am so glad it strikes an emotional chord with you! Have a beautiful week!

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Shakil Ahmed 05 December 2015

beautiful presentation of your heartfelt feelings, thanks for sharing

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