The Leaf..... Part 1 Comments

A wonderful write about a precious thing? ...well penned

Rose Marie many thanks for your kind and gracious comments and I have three endings to choose from to tie this up. And that choice is tricky, so wish me luck! Thanks again Rose Marie and remain poetry blessed.

Dominic many thanks and truth be told I have three endings to play with and to choose one to balance the long mid section is tricky. For I'm still undecided. And Walter de la Mare's ghost stories like his poems are great and standalone reads. Thanks again and take care.

A very engaging poem. Shaun's pen has always that mystery and magic that could draw his readers to his well crafted poems. This poem will definitely grip its readers towards its end. An amazing poem...great part 1. I will definitely go back to read the other parts of this one of a kind write. Five Stars! ! !

Intriguing opening to what is perhaps an epic poem Shaun. I believe that poetry contains a sense of magic & mystery..that why's I like to read the poems of Walter de la Mare. it's a' let's all explore fantasy realms' inspired five from me!