****the Leaf And The Wind **** Comments

a simple yet beautiful magnifed by the personification and imagery of your penning...Bravo nature at its best

Sounds great, but somewhat to complicated for me. I like it more lyrical. Take a look at my poems. / Yours Göran G

An attack of scenery! ! No words could describe such masterpiece! ! !

Very beautiful picture.

i like the imagery in this poem... love is such a complicated thing.. best regards, joan d.h.

Dr Kar Your poetry is very good Dr Kar The use of wording in your poems are very good. Reading you're poems I sense a profound deepness and emotion. You are a very good poet and look forward to reading more of you're poems. Kind Regards Louie

The poem opens up with a beautiful imagery…love and leaf…despite swayed by the wind the leaf clings to its illusion…its love… towards the one that is swaying it…turns swollen and half bared by wind’s action…the wind smelling it by its skin… lovely lines…enjoyed this poem very much

A lyrical piece filled with paradox and invention. You use all your senses to describe your vision and creep into the reader's skin. Lovely spiritual depth to this work. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I know this leaf and that wind... but you already know that don't you.. did the godwits fly over your way this time! ! ! ! ! !

Many concepts, but they don't connect.