Sunday, February 28, 2016

The Leading Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

The life giving sound of bees humming in the vivid yellow gorse,
The exhilarating sight of the Irish sea dazzling with the beauty of light,
Just it's natural source,
She walks with a powerful energy of her own inner force
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Hazel Durham
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

Where her deep emotions blossom As she feels the great warmth of nature's many faces........so touching and impressive. Nature is best friend to go with peace. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Susan Williams 14 August 2017

The life giving sound of bees humming in the vivid yellow gorse, The exhilarating sight of the Irish sea dazzling with the beauty of light, - - - - - - - - - - - - -I love how you put us right square down in the middle of your country's landscape and BOOM we're in mid-action. I always inhale your country's air and the fragrance of your country's vegetation. Thank you for bringing me to the emerald isle of yours.

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Mizzy ........ 01 October 2016

Mother Nature is a wonderful healer Hazel and you've captured the feelings of freedom and release beautifully is this inspiring poem. I love losing myself in Nature....really enjoyed the read! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 26 March 2016

inner feelings beautifully portrayed, compared with nature- the grass warms her bare foot a lovely coposition

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Dan Reynolds 09 March 2016

Hazel, I wonder if you might want a slight edit to s4l3? You start the line with trees (plural) but end with the breeze rustling it's leaves. maybe, their leaves would be better or start the line with a single tree? Otherwise, a very descriptive and thought provoking g poem. Danny.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 March 2016

Nature is the best companion for a lonely human. A great poem.

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Valsa George 29 February 2016

Nature comes to the aid of one who is cast away from the human society. She never feels lonely as the waves of the ocean sing to her and the wind whispers in her ears. Her inner strength is not drained by the adversities of life, on the other hand the strife of life has left her stronger and nature's balmy presence makes her forget all her wounds. The poem is vibrant with unflagging energy! Nature is presented in all its beauty here!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 February 2016

A beautifully conceived inspirational poem and a pleasurable read. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 February 2016

An absolutely beautiful and inspiring poem! Indeed, Nature heals all emotional wounds; and the way emotions are blending with imagery in this poem is superb!

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