Thursday, November 30, 2017

The Leaders Comments

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Some have iron fists
Few are loose
Majority are in between.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 July 2019

But no one has ever heard That they want to rule The most coveted of them all Where all authorities emanate The kingdom of all kingdoms The Kingdom of the Lord.....a wonderful stanza! A brilliant work.......................10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 December 2018

Leaders are doing everything except leading.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 December 2018

am sure The greedy, the fraud And the treacherous........ leaders should be governed at heart by the Almighty. or else they are in temptation to misuse their authority being influenced in the wrong way. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2018

I am sure The greedy, the fraud And the treacherous Could not even try They will be swept away Right away.....touching expression! I strongly support your words! A pragmatic write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2018

Qualities of authorities are given by God. The kingdom of all kingdoms he is. We bow before him with much devotion. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. Revisiting this we feel glad...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2018

I am sure The greedy, the fraud And the treacherous Could not even try They will be swept away Right away......so touching and true. Beautiful poem on politic nicely executed.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 June 2018

I am sure The greedy, the fraud And the treacherous Could not even try They will be swept away Right away.................Be it so.

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Robert Murray Smith 06 May 2018

This poem was reviewd by me before I deleted my poems. The comment therefore evaporated. A substantive write that seems right.+++10

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Muzahidul Reza 19 April 2018

Your poem reminds: 'now a days the leaders are but cheaters'.......... more or less seen so, ......... thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 February 2018

I admire the way you have articulate such an important issue! ....I am sure/The greedy, the fraud/And the treacherous/Could not even try/They will be swept away/Right away.....The recommendations provided at the end stanza is the truth! Appreciated your voice reflected in this heart provoking write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 January 2018

The frauds through treachery! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 January 2018

Thank you for comment and visit, Edward.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 December 2017

For Thine is the kingdom, and the power, and the glory, for ever and ever and who may be fraud, greedy or treacherous could challenge ever.......Austin......very intelligently scripted.........full credit.......thanks for sharing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 December 2017

Thank you, Deepak for your great comments. Your visit is highly appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 December 2017

Leaders become authority while time turns. Beautiful line of sky shines with power of sun. God is power of universe. We feel kingdom of Lord is true. From political point of view this is thought provoking as well as this is very thoughtful poem.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 December 2017

Thank you so much, Kumarmani. Your comments are gems to my pen.

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Rajnish Manga 30 November 2017

A very thought provoking poem. Analytical as well as critical. There is so much hypocrisy in and around our polity. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 December 2017

Thank you, Rajnish for your great comments. They will always be treasured. Your visit is very much appreciated.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

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