Sunday, August 9, 2015

The Lazy Eye Comments

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She walked the cobblestone streets at night,
Everyone thought her a pro,
Her skirt was short and her blouse was tight
And her eyes moved to and fro,
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David Lewis Paget
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Allotey Abossey 09 August 2015

She walked the cobblestone streets at night, Everyone thought her a pro, Her skirt was short and her blouse was tight And her eyes moved to and fro, Truly I love the flow. Good work

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David Lewis Paget 09 August 2015

Thanks for the comment, Allotey. Nice to get some response on this site.

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David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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