Friday, April 15, 2016

The Latest Campaign A Narrative Poem Comments

Rating: 4.5

An awareness spread through the ranks
of the horses, that their ordeal was over,
that life in a pasture with sweet grass,
clear streams, and room to roam, was soon
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Paul Sebastian 17 April 2016

A beautifully written narrative of a war scene as one would see in a movie! I would recommend this poem for a literature class. The words are carefully chosen and crafted into a poem. Development and thought flow is superb. Thank you, Daniel.

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Daniel Brick 17 April 2016

Thanks Paul for your appreciative comment. I wrote this poem because I remember horses used to wander freely in grasslands near my home, but now it's all developed and urbanized and I never see horses! BTW It's interesting you suggested a literature class because the details of the poem come from memory of reading HERODOTUS'S HISTORIES way back on 2005.

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St. Paul MN
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