Saturday, August 23, 2008

The Late Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

He had only one more gift to give,
the manner of his going.
He had only one short life to live,
and only now was knowing
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Martin Swords
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Fay Slimm 05 November 2008

The fine rhyming reaches into the heart in this moving piece and here we have a beautiful take on the phrase - 'the gift of going'. Very soon the reader knows what that means in this excellent message of courageous intent right to the end.

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Ron Flowers 16 October 2008

A very nice poem and message. Ron

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Adeline Foster 01 October 2008

Deep, but clear and empathetic, at least one would hope it is empathetic and not of personal perusal. Well written. Adeline

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Martin Swords

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Tiglin, Wicklow, Ireland
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